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In front of me, was a board on which it was written 'KANSAS' in bold letters. I was shocked and wanted to say something but when i turned my head i saw few guys appeared from nowhere and tried to attack Castiel with a knife like thing, i suppose. I screamed "look out!". Castiel turned and touched their head and suddenly, light came out from their heads. But before that, one of them said "You are coming with us, young lady" with those words they vanished into thin air. I started to rub my eyes because i just something unusual and SUPERNATURAL. "WHAT THE!" i blurted out and then i asked in a scared manner "W-h-a-t was t-h-a-t?" "Who are you?" This question of mine scared all of them. Bobby said "look umm.. actually we.. we  are.." "let it be Bobby" said Dean i will tell her the truth.

"Truth? what truth?" I asked as I was eager to know. Everyone left the room except for Dean. He was like "Listen, i am gonna share a secret of ours with you" "don't tell it to anyone else". I nodded my head. "look Sam, Bobby and I we both are hunters as in we hunt down monsters, demons etc.. not animals". I was like "what? are you serious? you are kidding me right?"

"No, its true and you saw what happened". I was so scared that i couldn't believe what Dean was saying. I couldn't believe my ears but I cannot deny the fact that i saw something which is unrealistic but I had to except the fact that such 'THINGS' existed in real life. "So, Castiel is like you?" I asked Dean."No, umm he is different, very different" "He is an angel of the lord" said Dean. "What" "No way, this can't be true" "ANGEL" "there is no such thing". I said it out loud. Dean said "No, i used to think the same way like you but the fact is that .... its real" he said it taking in a deep breath. I was stunned  after listening to Dean.

I did not have the courage to speak but at last i said "OK!" "Who were those guys? who attacked Castiel and wanted me to come with them?"

Dean raised one of his eyebrow and said "I don't know but i am pretty much sure that something is coming after you"  
"After me! are you serious? why me?" i screamed as i was scared like hell.

"As in who? I..I mean what?"I asked.

"I..." "now tell us why were you staring at that board and you wanted to say something to us" interrupted Bobby as he entered with Sam and Castiel. "By the way how did you manage to reach the jungle"? asked Sam politely.

"Umm. actually.." i was thinking should I say or not. All of them were eagerly waiting for my answer.

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This is the 1st part of my story "MY DREAM"

Disclaimer: I don't own SUPERNATURAL, it belongs to Eric Kripke.

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:iconjensenacklesluvr:
Mood: Love ~jensenacklesluvr May 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow!! I so wanna know more, I'm eager to find out more!!!! :eager:
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:iconamigogirl14:
ya bt u will have 2 wait till 11th june cuz my exams r goin on :)
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:iconjensenacklesluvr:
~jensenacklesluvr Jun 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ok, I can wait til then :D
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:iconamigogirl14:
u don't hav 2 cuz i already posted the 2nd part. read it and let me knw how is it??
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~jensenacklesluvr Jun 2, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh awesome!!! :happybounce:
Yeah sure will. How do I find it??
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:iconamigogirl14:
just go to my profile nd c da new deviations nd its name is "My Dream (part 2)
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:iconjensenacklesluvr:
~jensenacklesluvr Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ok :D Awesome,thx
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:iconamigogirl14:
nd i am updating part 3 also read that nd I changed da name of the central character its Sofia know :)
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Mood: Cheerful ~lady-sian May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i think there is a good story behind all of this but i'm assuming that either english is not your first language or you have severe dyslexia as the writing is very disjointed (and the words are sometimes in the wrong order within a sentence), as is the very misplaced use of punctuation and non-existant grammar, however as i said i believe there is a good plot at the heart of this story it's just having trouble coming across, this may be why no-one else has commented yet, i suggest getting a beta reader (there are offical ones on here or many other people who are happy to look things over for you as a friendly favour) they will help you to not just get your story across in the best way but may also teach you enough by your own reading of thier corrections that one day you may no longer need one :)

don't give up on the writing, your idea is good you just need help to get it across

good luck!!
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:iconamigogirl14:
omg i have serious prob with my grammar and i always make mistake while i try to write it quickly thnks for the advice :)
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